Re: Modern Poetry
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Posted by CE on December 03, 1998 at 19:33:04:
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In Reply to: Re: Modern Poetry posted by Wm. F. Adams, Jr. on December 01, 1998 at 09:41:40:
Good poem, you SlyMan--But can't I have the moon and stars without strangling the baby, as in: 'Was that camphor from a dress that made me so digress?' But what's with the swallow link? CE
: Language and love in a double helix - : life and order stalking on the epicycle.: 'love may creep/ like a fiend' : What a picture! : I'd nearly forgotten how exciting to read : your work. Now you've made me hungry again. : Bill : : Modern Poetry : : when language : : wearing its formal dress, : : well-spoken : : at its station in high society, : : disobeys the laws of exposition, : : Love may creep : : like a fiend : : into the camphor-scented rooms : : of finely-crafted sentences, : : strangle the sleeping baby : : and fill its bag : : with moon and stars. :
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